Alright, here's how it goes in image form...
[url]http://img243.echo.cx/img243/3372/background66uc.jpg[/url]
Please tell me what you think... it's my first one. :)
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Alright, here's how it goes in image form...
[url]http://img243.echo.cx/img243/3372/background66uc.jpg[/url]
Please tell me what you think... it's my first one. :)
The poem is good....
Design is great... But you could make the letters a bit more readable.
It's nice. I like it.Quote:
Originally Posted by Radical
One note. the "your" in the second to last line should be "you're"
The poem was great really...but need to make it a bit more deep....
Okay, I forgot to edit the you're bit, but here's a better copy...
[url]http://img56.echo.cx/img56/9199/background75zq.jpg[/url]
:)
Eh.
Not my kind of poem.
That background makes it seem sappy.
Was it sappy?
I didn't read it...
I don't know that it is a good idea to stick the words "you're killing everything inside me" on a birthday card. That might make the recipient feel kinda bad on their birthday.Quote:
Originally Posted by Radical
hey if you love somebody better set them on fire!!!
i am so damn funny sometimes i swear!
if you know what that's from you get 10 points
Dead Milkmen from Metaphysical Graffiti.
Gimme my 10 points!