In the long days to come, I ________, will cherish you _______ for everything you will ever offer. In the memories we will make, I will always be there. In the dreams we will share I will always care. Through the shadows and the light, the pain and the life we will forever share, I will always be there. I will support you and hold you up when you can’t stand. I will catch u if your fall and be your everlasting friend. I give you my heart and my soul, resting on the petals of this rose. Forever to be yours long after the petals fall from there place. Till the end of things to come in this life, I will be yours and honor your every thought. To be true to you as the one and only I love, long after the feathers fall from the dieing wings of the dove. Of every gift I’ve ever gotten, receiving your for both your father and our Father above is the one I gladly will hold close for the rest of my life.
I just wrote them for my wedding vows. What do you think? Any advice?