Confessing to a crush via a letter
I like this woman, and have decided to express my interest in her via a letter. We have been friends for about 2.5 months, and recently started to notice that like her more than just friends. My plan is to give the letter to her in person, and then await her response. Thoughts on this as well? Lastly here is the contents of the letter. Note: opinions, critique, etc are welcome.
Dear XX,
I am not so good with talking about my feelings sometimes, but I didn't want my thoughts to go unsaid... so I thought a letter would be best.
I like you XX, and I hope we can be more than friends. I have never met a woman as sweet, kind, smart, and beautiful as you. The sound of your voice can only be compared to a chorus of angels, and when I hear it it melts my heart. I hope that we can attempt a relationship, but I understand of you want to remain just friends.
Note: this will translated into a foreign language we both speak, to make it more special. Now for the last sentence is that necessary? Thanks!