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You Don't Deserve Me - DragonPoet
When our eyes first met
I knew I owe heaven my debt
Together we were perfect
I thought this could not be wreaked
Wrong I was to think
As I discovered you loved to drink
Things between us got bad
I wasn't happy, I was sad
I was their for you no mater what
I tried to help you in any rut
What thanks do I get out of all this?
Nothing but insults and dis
Take a good look at this face
No more time I will waste
Don't even try to plea
You don't deserve me
I like it :)
I liked it 'cause it rhymed.
the present is even more powerful than the past, you just have to learn rather than regret my son. :)
I like you poem, can relate to those thoughts.
It's eh.
(that's me being nice)
You Don't Deserve Me - DragonPoet
When our eyes first met - your eyes met, and had a conversation?
I knew I owe heaven my debt - how much did God loan you? does he/she charge interest?Together we were perfect - and alone you were just....normal?
I thought this could not be wreaked - i thought a lot of things...Wrong I was to think - ok, you are beginning to sound like yodaAs I discovered you loved to drink - needed something to rhyme with think, huh?Things between us got bad - ok...
I wasn't happy, I was sad - yeah, because most people are happy when things go badI was their for you no mater what - mkay...I tried to help you in any rut - rhymes with hutWhat thanks do I get out of all this? - uh oh, things heading down hill...Nothing but insults and dis - dis and this, i likeTake a good look at this face - okNo more time I will waste - good for youDon't even try to plea - i would've gone with, 'From you I will Flee'You don't deserve me - i would've gone with 'God, I must pee'
Take a good look at my faceQuote:
Originally Posted by RSK
You know my smile looks out of place
If you look closer it's easy to trace
The tracks of my tears
Baby, baby baby....
I liked the love poems Lloyd wrote for shh! better. :D
I like green eggs and ham.. :)
i like it dragon poet
i like you peom so much it expresses everything i went true in my last relationship you are so good. i like this one better than the new one.
good job