No Home

You are an alcoholic
But our love still grew
You OD'd twice
But I still loved you

I hold your hand
As you push the needle inside
You are addicted in sickness
And I am kneeled beside

Even though you are different
Even though people stared
You were always my angel
Because I had always cared

But now things are different
You are just wierd
I need to let you go
Because you are psycho!

Sorry to leave you this way
I never thought it would be
Don't ever write me
Or I'll get a restraing order

Don't follow me home
Or even call my phone
No more bleeding teddy bears
Or crazy notes on my door

Please leave me alone
In my heart you have no home

Oh, you went back in time and read my mind when I was breaking up with my college boyfriend!

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Originally Posted by RSK [Dear Guest/Member you have to reply to see the link.click here to register]

You are an alcoholic
But our love still grew
You OD'd twice
But I still loved you

I hold your hand
As you push the needle inside
You are addicted in sickness
And I am kneeled beside

Even though you are different
Even though people stared
You were always my angel
Because I had always cared

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This much of it was sweet. The other part was just hilarious. But it sounds like you just clashed 2 poems together.. Can you work on this one a little more?

Pweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeez?