My own composing poem [dont laugh >"< ]

Hard choice


Love is simple,
Yet complicated.
Friendship seems complicated,
Yet simple.
Love and friendship
Like sun and like moon.
They never grow together.
When the sun comes forth,
The moon withdraws to darkness.
When it's time for the moon,
The sun sillently hides its face.
The day starts with the sun,
The light of destiny.
It ends with the moon,
The light of mystery
But....
Feeling is strange
He doesn't want like that.
He starts with...
....a peaceful shiny light of the moon.
He may end it with...
....a cruel broken light of the sun,
Or a rainbowy ending.
Sun and moon
Love and friendship
Which one ...
...destiny should choose?




can you guys read it and tell me what you think and what i should replace? :stache: