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Your Lips
Like an apple.
Red and delicious.
The answer to my prayers and wishes.
Full of smiles when happy.
A bit of pout when sad.
Full of sweet kisses.
That makes my heart glad.
Full of kind words.
When someimes I feel gloom.
Full of sweet songs.
That could fill a room.
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Use more metaphors. I love it when a writer compares two things you don't normally see together and makes it believable.
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thats really good...like it!!
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Amazing words!! well deserved trophies!!
Very sensual and heartwarming!! Thank you
so much for sharing!!