Movie Ending

This is a letter, but I thought this place would be an okay place to put it. Could anyone help me with fine tuning it? Maybe different words in different spots. I was to send this to her, I want her to understand where I'm coming from. here it is....Criticism is Encouraged.



it’s just like a movie, falling in love with your best friend. She, not feeling the same way, wanting to stay friends, loving your best guy friend. He’s everything you’ve ever wanted, everything, Funny, sweet, handsome, everything. You can’t have him.... I know the feeling. He feels the same way you do for me, wanting to stay friends. I know I’m second best, I know I haven’t got everything he has, I know I am one to stumble over words, one who doesn’t know what to say at times. I mess up when talking to you, it’s because, I love you, and you make me nervous. I know you wouldn’t choose me over him. But, I’m here, I want you. I love you. He doesn’t. I’ve never felt this way, ever. Where is the movie ending? The part where you realize he isn’t for you and we’re perfect, we’re meant to be. Where is it?


Help please! Thanks

Well, my first criticism is about your poor judgment in wanting to send this to her. Don't do that.

Haha, thanks for your honesty. Why shouldn't I? I want her to know how much I really do care about her....

Because it sounds like she has a boyfriend. Respect that.

She doesn't.

From what I get it sounds like she's interested in someone other than you? :S