life and death

these are the lyrics to a song of mine, if anyones interested in hearing the actual song let me know..

No kings or queens, No knights in shining armor
no damsel in distress to save and build my honor
No fairytales, or happy endings
the only smile on my face is when beats and rhymes are blending
No true love, No angels from above
only vultures who disguise themselves as doves
No peace, and no equality
cant make it through the day cause creditors callin me
No simaritans and no interest in justice
im steadily slaying marks like my name was augustus
No recovery, or rehabilitation
just cages with pharmicuticals for sedation
No fulfillment and no satisfaction
every girl i **** is a fatal attraction
No more emotions and no awareness
feeling anything seems to be way too careless
No more trust and no hope or faith
chasing love forever seems to be my fate
No more cry cause no more tears still exist
the sadness is consumed by anger and clenched fists
No cloud 9, and theres nothing in the sky
the night has blackened the sunshine from our eyes
No more dreams, no more aspirations
a man can both rise and fall from his creations
No more miracles and no more water to wine
just false reality, masked in smoke and lines
No smoking gun, and no easy answers
so i cant tell you why little kids die of cancer
No loyalty and no such thing as friend
aint a motha****a whos really there till the end
No clean slates and no fresh starts
just pounds of emotional baggage on my heart
No way out and that means no escape
except in stereos, headphones, cds and tapes
No money, just some lint in my pocket
but many emcees have taught me thats not what i need to rock it
I tryto move on but theres no more forward motion
I cant escape the past despite all my devotion
No more life, no heartbeats, and no breathe
No light at the end of the tunnel...
Just some death

Life and death, it’s a mess
Constantly wondering, perplexed and blundering
About the future, not the past nor present
This is my life, and should I end it
Reaction how will they effect, defect
Will it cause to another, someother
My beloved mother
The tears will flow, will she be able to let go
If I were to go, before her time? No
But from the lyrics of Clifton
Didn’t sound to uplifting
It seems like you’re getting nothing from life
Nothing suffice, jesus Christ
What’s going on in your life
Too much problems and worries, life long stories
About passion and pain, days only filled with rain
No sunshine in your face, nothing to replace
The loneliness that has somehow filled your heart
Maybe torn it apart
Maybe from all the girls that you fuct
Finally your life has run out of luck
No friendships that bind, dude you’re running out of time
Since there is no one you trust, nuts about to bust
Lust, had lead you to suffering
Covering, yourself at night, only filled with despite
Physical or emotional pain, watch out, it will drain
All the energy you have, not allow you to surpass
To emotional happiness, not a day of bliss
Not even from a kiss, no old gf’s to miss
Your friends have strained, bitches left you feeling played
It sounds like this is your reality, but in actuality
You have to change the outlook, you misunderstood
The meaning hiding, darkness misguiding
Your view, which has lead you to construe
That you’re empty inside
With only loneliness with to confide


raverboy

dam raver this is so true but we as human beings have the power to change if thats what we really want, as i have and so many others, u know this also. wow you suprise me always hun and thats what i like aout you. you as honest and as blunt as they come. xoxo horny toad blue

I get alot outof life, but as anyone who has a creative form of expression knows, you use that to vent negativity and reflect on it at the same time, its like i acknowledge everything in those lyrics..

at the same time i feel it through every drop of blood running in my veins, its sad, and not the happiest thoughts, but theyre true none the less

Ok first of all, Clifton, I know youre gifted as hell, keep doing what youre doing with your music! Its wonderful! You've found a great outlet for your negativity that has HAPPENED, you know you can change that bs right now, and youre starting in the right direction! Thumbs up to you my friend!

Second, Raver, OMFG, I had NO idea you had this hidden talent? WOW Im thoroughly impressed by this!

Raver..I'm impressed too. I didn't think you had it in you. Never in a million years would I guess you would ever read so long a post, and what's more, post one of your own.

I must have just witnessed a sober moment in the life of Raver. I'm writing this date and event down in my diary.

Freddie

i try to stay out of the poetry section, but my friends did get me into flowing and writing. as far as flowing, i don't really care for it as much, but it's something that we used to do a lot, especially when we're drunk. raverboy

Ha ha, actually, I had a phase back when I was a freshman in college. 2 buddies and myself. One had gone off to MIT and we called him the east coaster. Then my bud down here went on ahead and called himself from the dirty south. I wasn't all that into it, mainly I'd just read them, but I had a couple of weak rhymes in there. I did recognize your lines as flow rather than traditional poetry.

Not bad, R.

Freddie

haha before as i was growing up, in all that lovey dovey stage, and when boys to men where in, i got into all that poetry crap. later i just used the rhyming ability to express how i feel in the day to day things. they usually come off as life subjects, and when my friends started to get into flowing, i took it from there.

raverboy

For the lady's
Flamingos walk and sway in peace
seeing this it makes my troubles cease
the sun is hiding leaving a pink scar
that streaches right across the sky
that we only see so far
and all i do is look into your eyes
for that special touch of paradise
just a touch and touch of paradise
for that special touch of paradise
you hold my hand and together we kiss
doesnt take long for us to get the gist
all this love that stretches out across the land
just now dont let go of my hand
a touch of spring and autum breeze
well the tree's vibrate when our eyes meet
and i dream about the love that we have been making
you touched my hand and i woke up shaking

flamingos and blue skies?? this is supposed to be about life, do or die
punch for punch, and eye for an eye
where everything is even, there's no believing
in pink flamingoes, unless you're letting go
the mind that is, into anothers buisness
puff puff and pass pass, hopefully this sensation will last
the only reason, for me seeing
pinks birds spread their wings, a new beginning
another day, another high, life is short, why not get high

hahahahaha

raverboy

wow now that i read this over, that was really short ah?? well that is my reponse to aussie.

raverboy

i like it Illusional lol.

hrmm..did anyone actually read what i posted, or only illusionals reply?