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I would never bealive if i didn't see
So beautiful as the christmas three
Like the winter in the sky,
And if the sun would shine
I could bealive you're mine
My soul would be white
And I could dream all night
If these were really true
Then Chrismas is really you
Beautiful and immortal winter.
I can't believe no one commented on this; I thought that was a very beautiful poem. I have always been a "fan" of rhyming couplets, or just rhyming in general in poetry, and you did a nice job with your rhymes.
Though I despise the season, this poem made me come to appreciate winter a little bit.
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DarkNeko
Thank you very much for your observations Lindsay.
I'll try to make more big and beautiful poems and even one for you.
You never know. :)