Please help me out

I was wondering if there was anybody out there that could put together a poem for a guy who is trying to get his girlfriend back. i was dumped by the girl but still love her very deeply. please help.

well..that's not really a nice thing to do..i mean, it's stupid that you "win her back" (if) with somebody's poem..

Take your time, get some paper, take a pen and try it on your own..

Use your feelings, write with sence, make it sweet but no too sweet and you'll do just all right ;)

How about this one.

I don't want to loose you,
I know we had our ups and down,
and I hate the fact that you left me too.
It shouldn't be this way,
I hate to see everyone go out and be in love,
why did you have to ditch me that day?
I belive we could still give it a shot,
because when I am with you, things get real hot,
you know the spot, I would listen to every single thought.
I want to tell you to be mine,
I promise I won't screw up next time,
because girl, your so fine, your still in your prime,
and I would want you to be my valentine.
So please come back,
don't leave me again,
I'll promise you that I'll always be your friend.

Try that one Drezie.

hey thats pretty good, thanks alot i appreciate it

Anytime dude. I know what your feeling.