I once had a cat,
that went up my back,
it scratched up my kneck.
OUCH OUCH OUCH
I once saw a cat,
It also went up my back,
Once again,
It scratched my kneck
OUCH OUCH OUCH!
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I once had a cat,
that went up my back,
it scratched up my kneck.
OUCH OUCH OUCH
I once saw a cat,
It also went up my back,
Once again,
It scratched my kneck
OUCH OUCH OUCH!
Finally somebody made a non-sappy poem.
Was about damn time.
On top of that. I actually like it.
outrageous:P
To the un-trained mind.Quote:
Originally Posted by Marvelous
you should've gotten a dog instead.
raverboy
kneck isnt a word
LOL . I just noticed that. Hmmm....I think I will leave it anyways.Quote:
Originally Posted by BlackRose
wow. this poem is intense. i'm going to wendy's. see ya!
Watch out for the cats!Quote:
Originally Posted by misombra
Ha. OV was trying to improve the poem w/some Olde English, I think. And he misspelled "Kat" too!Quote:
Originally Posted by BlackRose
Keep your dayjob OV.
;)
no lol, I am pretty sure I spelled cat right.Quote:
Originally Posted by indigosoul
all i can say that is a very sad i am sorry but that poem has no peoitic meaning to me and i don't think it is good you best bet is to stop writing now
your avatar is out of control...
I think it is a beautiful poem. It's a startling commentary on human nature in response to feline adversity. Keep it up!
Peace.
Finally someone who understands!Quote:
Originally Posted by bohemiandonut