Can I get some opinions on my rap?

So I wrote this rap song for my current love interest. Could I get some feedback please? It's one of my first:) If you dig, I'd love to know why and please subscribe!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z3nUUVXM3eA&feature=plcp

it seems to be nice:)

Thank you so much!

Please subscribe/like my page so you can hear my new stuff!

It seems you really put your fashion as well your emotion on this great.!
keep on doing what you just started.

Thanks so much! Be sure to subscribe/like the page!