My Girl's Poem To Me

My girl wrote this poem to me at the pizza place, while we were waiting for our food. I would have cried if people weren't watching.

It's sweet:

I Can See Myself



I dont need to have a crystal ball

To see what the future will be

It's hazy for everyone else

But it's clearly you and me



I can see myslef with you

Because I'm with you now

Even if I'm a lean mean girl

Or some old fat cow



I can see myslef with you

Holding tight your hand

Seeing your pretty blue eyes

Wearing a wedding band



I can see myself laughing

Crying with tears in my eyes

I can feel myself hurting

Even with just for a while goodbyes



I can see myself years and years from now

You'll be happy and so will I

It's a feeling, a love, that'll last

Right up with me when I die

thats a sweet poem...i like it!

Really Romantic & full of emotions a & feelings.

how lovely..really nice to read

I like it, I am not gonna change it because it means a lot to you. Since It is from your hear, only can revise it. Very well done.

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Originally Posted by princehole [Dear Guest/Member you have to reply to see the link.click here to register]

I like it, I am not gonna change it because it means a lot to you. Since It is from your hear, only can revise it. Very well done.

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It sounds like you want to critique this love poem.

Real nice poem ~~~like it

wow, so sweet...if someone wrote something like that for me, i'd probably cry too ;)

That is great. I would have probably cried too.

I don't like it. I mean it has a good intent and it's the thought that counts. But the poem itself is pretty weak.

thanks aloooooooooooooooot

I don't like it either.

Nice Poem. I really love reading poems. Thanks for sharing.

This poem would be cute if it didnt have the 'marry me or die' tone to it...

Isn't that sweet I am in love with your girl

Damn, how long did it take to get your pizza?

sweet poem ilike it

nice very nice poem