When I Close My Eyes

When I close my eyes,
all I see is your face.
The first time we met,
the moments I could never forget.

I dream of being near you,
dream of the day when we can be as one.

I hope that day comes,
then all my pain will be gone.:(


First draft, but hey.. I attempted lol. I LOVE writing

Sweet :D

Good one.

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Originally Posted by abejareina1989 [Dear Guest/Member you have to reply to see the link.click here to register]

When I close my eyes,
all I see is your face.
The first time we met,
the moments I could never forget.

I dream of being near you,
dream of the day when we can be as one.

I hope that day comes,
then all my pain will be gone.:(

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nice poem :love:

I like the poem. So loving and caring and touching.