My Road

I walk a lonely road
I walk alone with nothing but my thoughts
To wish for someone to pass me by
And to see not a soul
It leaves my heart empty
I shall walk this lonely road everlasting

I walk a lonely road
I walk alone with nothing but my empty heart
And my thoughts to keep me company
I have walked all day and now I rest
As I rest I feel at peace
But as I wake I realize what I have
Nothing but this lonely road
That I shall walk everlasting

Why must I walk this lonely road?

I've found someone
And as we walk this lonely road
I feel my heart begin to rise
We've walked all day and now we rest
As we rest I feel at peace
And as I wake I soon realize
I have nothing
Nothing but this lonely road
This lonely road I shall walk everlasting

- Ace

ugh! dude... that harsh, but i like it ;)

Very heart-felt, I must say. It's chock-full of pure emotions, but that's why i like it so much. You did a good job, and gave proof that a poem does not require a rhyme scheme to be awesome (I myself like rhyming, but there is always the occasional exceptional non-rhyming poem).

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DarkNeko - novice critic XD

Thank you.

i love the poem very much.it give me a good feeling

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Originally Posted by happyteen

i love the poem very much.it give me a good feeling

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you know i've actually gotten that response more than you would expect. when i wrote it I was very sad because a girl had hurt me. and the poem was meant to be sad, what exactly gives you a good feeling about it?