My love story song

Well its not so much a poem but more a song I wrote after my girlfriend broke it off out of nowhere but lemme know what you all think (its all true experiences):

And Then You Smiled-

I remember how that day started
After a perfect night
I couldn’t see how it could go wrong
But then my truck got towed, I failed that test.
I thought how could today get any worse

(Chorus)
And then you smiled at me…
And all my worries and all my pain,
Ya, they just seemed to wash away
I knew I could never live
without seeing you each and every day
Ya, girl, I just can’t help but love everything about you

I can’t stop thinkin about all the memories we have
How you always stole my clothes
But always looked cuter than I ever could
Laying there asleep I couldn’t help but think you were an angel

And then you smiled at me…
And all my worries and all my pain,
Ya, they just seemed to wash away
I knew I could never live
without seeing it each and every day
Ya, girl, I just can’t help but love everything about you

So today comes and you tell me it’s over
Said you had moved on and it just wasn’t how it used to be
Well girl, you can’t stop me from loving you
And I’ll be waiting for that day I get to see it again…
And then you smiled at me…
And all my worries and all my pain,
Ya, they just seemed to wash away
I knew I could never live
without seeing it each and every day
Ya, girl, I just can’t help but love everything about you
I just can’t help but loving you…

I knew I could never live
without seeing you each and every day
Ya, girl, I just can’t help but love everything about you


thanks dear ...its touched words ....just right alove cant forced ourselves to stand against it ..he represents all the lifes
God bless u and aproaches the day to seeing ur love

I knew I could never live
without seeing you each and every day
Ya, girl, I just can’t help but love everything about you
thanks dear ...its touched words ....just right alove cant forced ourselves to stand against it ..he represents all the lifes
God bless u and aproaches the day to seeing ur love
06-07-09 11:01 AM

U are so charming.

thank you, both of you.