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    I have some

    I have a lot of Love Poems at home and I will put them on here tomarrow

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    This one is called Him-

    I think of him day and night
    My grades sure are becoming a fright

    But he's in my head all the time
    I can't believe he's really mine

    He's tall and handsome, he plays it cool
    To me other boys look like foals

    He seems to me all so clever
    My love for him will be forever



    that is one of my favorites tell me what you think about it
    Later ya'll

    LeahSueDolton

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    I think it sucks.

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    LOL.. I see you are being your normal self Carp!
    If you can't handle the thorns, don't crave the rose!!

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    lol. this person is funny.

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    I am starting to believe that she really IS 14...

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    Really? I thought maybe younger, like around 12.

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    Don't let them get you down, Leah. They're too old to remember when just making an effort was over half the battle. Try writing a poem that doesn't rhyme, why don't you?
    Last edited by whaywardj; 28-10-05 at 12:07 PM.
    Speak less. Say more.

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    i think this is somebody trying to mess with our minds.

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    Quote Originally Posted by whaywardj
    Don't let them get you down, Leah. They're too old to remember how just making an effort is half the battle. Try writing a poem that doesn't rhyme, why don't you?
    And whaywardj is so old that he is being reintroduced to the idea that making the effort is half the battle.

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    Quote Originally Posted by misombra
    i think this is somebody trying to mess with our minds.
    More like your conscience.
    Speak less. Say more.

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    Keep expressing yourself Leah. The sky is the limit for you.
    Sniff first, then scratch.

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    Quote Originally Posted by misombra
    i think this is somebody trying to mess with our minds.
    I cant beleive your the only other person who realizes this!

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    Quote Originally Posted by carpflounder
    I cant beleive your the only other person who realizes this!
    Hey! I realize this too.

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    Well, she's not messing with my mind! She's tugging at my heart and soul. Her poetry devours me.
    Sniff first, then scratch.

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