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    One Amazing Morning

    Hey everyone, one of the things i enjoy doing my spare time is writtihing fetish etc stories or stories trying to recreate momenets in my life here is one tell me what u think

    The rising sun bathes the room in brilliant, warm reds
    and golds. The silence is punctuated only by the
    chirping of birds. I feel your presence so close to
    mine. I listen to your rhythmic breathing as you wander
    in the world of dreams. Peace wraps me securely. I
    turn in your arms to gaze upon your sleeping face,
    my mind storing each feature for future memories of this
    time we have had together. Fully cognizant that today
    we must part not knowing when, if ever, we shall be
    together again, I want to absorb as much of you as
    possible; to have the mental images available at a
    moment's recall; to have the memories there to buoy me
    when I need it.
    You stir. The last images of your dream dissipate as
    you slowly awaken. Our gazes lock --communicating more
    than spoken words could say. Our bodies register the
    sensuousness of each other -so conscious of the
    pleasures we have shared. You draw me closer to you.
    You slowly cover my mouth with yours, the gentle kiss
    imperceptibly becoming more tempestuous as our
    tongues explore and twine about each other. With a
    playful passion, I suck your tongue into my mouth,
    tweaking it with my lips; my own tongue caressing yours.
    Probing. Tasting. Licking. Our tongues ignite
    desires.
    My hand slides under your arm. My fingers lightly
    tracing your spine....running small circles around each
    ridge ... inching downwards. My fingers telegraphing
    to my mind tactile memories of your body, its shape, its
    feel. I press closer to you. My pliable breasts
    pressing against your chest. The firmness of the
    erect nipples rub against you as the gentle motions of
    my large breasts massage you.
    Our breathing gives audible evidence of the desires
    we are feeling for each other --the patient urgency felt
    deep within. As I press closer, I feel your erect member
    slide between my thighs, rubbing gently against my own
    erect button. My hips gyrate; my thighs closing to
    grasp you. We move together ever so slowly, our kisses
    deepening, emulating the motions of our hips.
    I feel the stirring within myself, the nerves sending
    electric signals of awareness to my mind. No longer do
    I particularly think of what we are doing. Rather, my
    body just surrenders to the signals --it automatically
    responds. Giving. Taking. Your hands arousing me,
    time has seemed suspended. All that exists is the need
    to give you as much pleasure as I can while accepting
    the pleasures you offer to me.
    Warmth spreads through me. I feel the moisture
    seeping from me as the inner cavern responds, preparing
    the pathway to total fulfillment. You slowly roll on
    top of me. My legs wrapping around your hips.
    I feel you sliding up and down in the groove -
    - each stroke sending warmth throughout my body. You
    slowly begin to probe the damp inner causeway. Entering
    shallowly at first; withdrawing. Each penetration a bit
    deeper than the one before. My inner muscles clamp on
    your member. Drawing it in deeper --hips thrusting to
    meet you. Wanting you fully within me. Yet .... you
    tease.
    My legs have risen higher -- now resting behind your
    shoulders. My hands sliding along your body -- urging
    you to give me pleasures I am eagerly willing to allow
    myself to feel. As you press more fully into my, my body
    quivers. A small gasp of pleasure escapes my lips. I
    kiss your neck, licking the drops of sweat that have
    begun to form. Tasting you, my body responds as I never
    knew possible. I thrust myself upwards, taking you into
    me as deeply as possible. My knees holding you there,
    my muscles stroke --clenching --releasing --creating a
    suction upon your member --drawing on you. My hands
    slide further downward --reaching between us to pet your
    quivering orbs.
    Time is suspended. How long we lie like that
    unknown. No outward movement reveals the deep-seated
    explosions within us. Escalating sensations bear us
    along on waves of elation. My legs relax their hold
    upon you and you begin to thrust into me ... my hips
    rising and falling in cadence. All that exists are
    consummation of the desires to experience the beauty of
    physical love. Torrents of warm moisture drench your
    pounding member as my body arches in a climax. My moans
    of delight fill the room as tremors ripple through my
    body. My muscles spasmically gripping you --I urge you
    to release yourself -- to fill me with your own fluids
    ... wanting to feel it spreading upwards, merging
    with mine.
    You thrust deeply and release. I drawn on your
    member, wanting every last drop as our mouths again seek
    each other ... a final kiss of fervor as our bodies
    mutually absorb each other.
    Drained, we lie together. A closeness that can never
    be erased. We have voyaged pathways to Euphoria that
    few have felt. We have merged and our bodies acted and
    reacted as though permanently joined. You hold me
    close. We stroke each other. Words are not needed.
    There are no promises to be made; no memories to be
    forgotten. Our minds register each moment - each
    sensation - each other.
    MAKE RIGHT LIVING GROW
    mUah
    ~Elvira

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    I honestly don't think you wrote that.
    Live together. Die alone - [url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lvi_RCM3FAM[/url]

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    Me thinks Acid might be a little unclear on one or two concepts.

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    Based on Acid's other posts, she doesn't spell well enough to have written that (not that I read it all).

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    come on admit it. you didn't really write that, did you?

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    Quote Originally Posted by shh!
    Based on Acid's other posts, she doesn't spell well enough to have written that (not that I read it all).
    Exactamondo.
    Live together. Die alone - [url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lvi_RCM3FAM[/url]

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    Ahahhahaa! Look what I found!

    [url]http://www.1stsexstories.com/romance/dreamy1.html[/url]

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    AAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHA

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    lol...i guess she did give us the heads up...on the lies that is
    -to be nobody but yourself in a world which is doing its best, night and day, to make you everybody else means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting.- e.e.cummings

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    you don't have to lie to get people to like you.

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    yea, if life was like that...some people know no other way then to pretend
    -to be nobody but yourself in a world which is doing its best, night and day, to make you everybody else means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting.- e.e.cummings

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    whoooo...i should a cheaked this posts stuff out before when people started posting ::shocked face:: lol hell no i didant write this im an actress i have other people wright amazing lines for me lol
    like i said, or at least i thought i said, i enjoy wriighting stories and recreative moments in my life i found this like maby a little less then a year ago
    sorry if i didant make myself clear i seem to be doing that alot on this forum
    MAKE RIGHT LIVING GROW
    mUah
    ~Elvira

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    Oh God, keep the lies comming.
    Live together. Die alone - [url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lvi_RCM3FAM[/url]

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    I didn't even have to look at the link, shh!, to know what had happend. Common, guys. Give lil Acid a break. Everybody has their online alter-ego. Some of us just like to fluff it up now and then with SOMEBODY ELSE'S trappings. It IS amusing, though, to see one or the other of us get busted pretending we're someone we're really not. Kinda like what we show of ourselves on that first date; then have to uncover after the first fight.

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    Quote Originally Posted by whaywardj
    Everybody has their online alter-ego. Some of us just like to fluff it up now and then with SOMEBODY ELSE'S trappings. .
    Now that IS an interesting remark. It makes me wonder in what ways the people on this forum are different than what we might expect or have been led to assume. Hmm... well I suppose I may be somewhat more direct online than I am in person, although I am pretty straightforward in person, too. What about the rest of you?

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