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    I will be a friend

    This poem was originally called, "will you be my friend"... but the final version sounded way too 'needy'... so i flipped the words, and now it's call... I will be your friend. It's pretty short, just a bunch of fragmented thoughts that i put together, pretty scrappy too.

    I can be your friend...
    Don't pay me for my time
    I may not be a gem
    Or a diamond in the rough
    But I'll try my best
    For you too like me
    I hope you'll be my friend
    I'll brake your fall
    Just give me a call
    I hope you'll be my friend


    EDIT... i like it, only because it could so easily be about a hooker, OR just a regular person thinking about someone else... (not to say hookers are not regular people)... but you get what i mean!
    Last edited by RSK; 07-04-08 at 04:58 PM.

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