Please help me out

[Drewzie]

I was wondering if there was anybody out there that could put together a poem for a guy who is trying to get his girlfriend back. i was dumped by the girl but still love her very deeply. please help.

[Crammond]

well..that's not really a nice thing to do..i mean, it's stupid that you "win her back" (if) with somebody's poem..

Take your time, get some paper, take a pen and try it on your own..

Use your feelings, write with sence, make it sweet but no too sweet and you'll do just all right

[Nice Lover Boy]

How about this one.

I don't want to loose you,
I know we had our ups and down,
and I hate the fact that you left me too.
It shouldn't be this way,
I hate to see everyone go out and be in love,
why did you have to ditch me that day?
I belive we could still give it a shot,
because when I am with you, things get real hot,
you know the spot, I would listen to every single thought.
I want to tell you to be mine,
I promise I won't screw up next time,
because girl, your so fine, your still in your prime,
and I would want you to be my valentine.
So please come back,
don't leave me again,
I'll promise you that I'll always be your friend.

Try that one Drezie.

[Drewzie]

hey thats pretty good, thanks alot i appreciate it

[Nice Lover Boy]

Anytime dude. I know what your feeling.