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Thread: Hold me, I'm so pathetic.

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    Hold me, I'm so pathetic.

    Little riddle bout a guy who lost all his character and respect.

    loosen my tensions
    feed me, I'm ****ing hungry
    degrade me
    i want my gun back.

    hold me, I'm so pathetic
    study, all my aspects
    maybe, I can find her
    not dirty, exploring only.

    like a ****ing resume
    experience potentials
    experience credentials
    experience the process
    people ****ing every day
    white lies, sitting inside, you'll get sicker than another little pecker

    Burn me
    for you to potentially grade me
    i'm ****ing hungry
    feed me, the wells of comfort
    exhume me
    i want my complex back

    A wicked man once picked off his scabs and fed them
    To the pigeons
    Help him, he is so cornered
    Kill him, your mercy will.
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    I like it, the discriptions were short, but to the point and well thought of. Does tell the purpose very well.

    Good job


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    i dun understand >.<

    lol maybe im too young to understand haha but i think its very good lol

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