So long
By: DragonPoet
Wipe those tears off your cheeks
Your the one who ruined this week.
I told you I would leave
So wipe your nose with that sleeve.
Do you miss all the things i've done?
I shed light for you like the sun.
No more holding you in my arms
Keeping you from anyones harms.
I did everything I could
Cross the world for you I would.
In the end I just wish one thing
Happiness to you I wish will bring.
You and I were drifting away
But I wasn't the one who was at bay.
You treat me like dirt
Sometimes I think you wanted me hurt.
Now i'm leaving
You can start believing.
Good luck finding another man
I hope you know, no one will do what I can.
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10-12-05, 12:34 AM #1
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So long
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10-12-05, 01:32 AM #2
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Not bad!
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10-12-05, 01:36 AM #3
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It is a good poem. I've had exes tell me I would never find a man who would treat me as good as they did.
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10-12-05, 01:43 AM #4
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Ever had e-people tell you that?
If not: Junsui - you'll never find a man who will treat you as good as me.
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10-12-05, 01:44 AM #5
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lol e-people.
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10-12-05, 01:47 AM #6
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Good stuff!
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10-12-05, 07:45 AM #7
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it's sound is very good
wanna to c more of that
thanxNO LIMITATION
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11-12-05, 12:54 PM #8
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WOW. I really like it. Nice Work
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04-02-06, 06:41 PM #9
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Another good one dragon poet, please keep posting them
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