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    Goodbye

    First one

    As my life collapses,
    the game of love, just crashes.

    I was happy to understand the word 'love',
    I thought it was a gift, from above.

    My love for you was burning,
    but now it is all turning.

    I lookup to the sky,
    our relationship, goodbye.

    I feel pain, underneath my chest,
    the bullet, goes through my vest.

    The moment I saw you kissing with that other guy,
    tears where falling down my face, with no words to say.

    Through all these tears, I try to keep strong,
    but they keep coming, all day long.

    You don't deserve to see me hurt,
    what was I for you? Just a flirt?

    Feels like i'm being hit with bricks,
    my heart for you, no longer ticks,
    that's right, me and you no longer exists.

    I'm really done with this all,
    not wanna get back into a brawl.

    The flame inside me has extincted,
    this can no longer be fixed.

    This was my goodbye to you,
    the last poem I've written for you.
    Last edited by Lolita1990; 04-09-10 at 08:27 PM.

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    I know you.

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    Nice Poem. I really love reading poems. Thanks for sharing.

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    yes I like reading poems to , thanks for sharing

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    Very true, Adbanks2, very true. You're a wise Spambot.
    Is it burnin'? Well, f-ck, now you're learnin'.

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    very nice poem

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