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Thread: My 4th Song (Untitled)

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    My 4th Song (Untitled)

    Well I got through another song, currently untitled...but I'm trying lol. I know these songs are similar in content..but like Jane said, I'm kinda in the place right now. So without further ado, here they are:

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    [V1]
    If ever there was a time to believe,
    This is now, but I can't
    Changes of a system
    That faultered and turned to dust.

    So what do we do,
    Nothing, I'm leaving
    This sunrise has faded into dawn
    and stripped me of this pleasure
    But I don't care anymore, this is forever.

    [C1]
    Here we go,
    I'm not stopping you,
    There's nothing I can do
    You left anyway
    I'm not going to do this anymore
    So this is to goodbye.

    [V2]
    Such an enigma
    What the hell does he have?
    In a stretch, I can't believe
    But whatever, I'm gone
    These stars will guide me
    And over time, you fade and disappear.

    I'll wake up in a whole new shell,
    You'll be gone, and I'll be here.
    I'll find another, you did
    But at least I didn't lie... (stretch into chrous)

    [C2 - Final 2x mixed with faded Verse down below]
    Here we go,
    I'm not stopping you,
    There's nothing I can do
    You left anyway
    I'm not going to do this anymore
    So this is to goodbye.

    2 years down the drain
    I fought each and ever day
    But I'm tired of it, I don't want it anymore
    You simply ignored the fact
    Now everything I did for you is gone....

    So this is to goodbye.

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    Hope ya enjoyed, peace!
    Last edited by Innova; 12-07-04 at 09:30 AM.


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    Innova~I hope youre doing something with these someday!
    everything happens for a reason...beginning to wonder why.

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    Innova, whatever that place is that your in. Good or bad, happy or sad, look at all the great stuff that's coming out of it! Keep it up.

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