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    a poem from happiness

    i think im in love
    because even the
    shining in your
    eyes makes me
    think there is
    not a thing as
    great on this
    earth and i
    just want to
    cry cause i
    feel so great
    and you make
    me feel special
    a place for me
    in your heart
    is where i
    belong so never
    let go and
    always hold on
    because life
    is too short and
    too quick and
    too fun
    together

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    That's a nice little poem there, lilwing. But you might want to re-arrange a few lines for read-a-bility. Other than that, I like it

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