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Thread: Jaded

  1. #1
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    Jaded

    My body shatters
    My eyes won't shut
    I feel heavy, I ache all over
    My legs give way
    Open my mouth, Try to speak
    Yawns only spill out
    My neck is stiff
    My hands won't work
    My fingers doesn't bend
    Doesn't twist, Doesn't turn
    The way they did once
    What is wrong with me
    Am I sick, Am I ill
    I can't think
    My head is banging, Blood pounding
    Words are forming
    Trying to escape
    But they won't come out
    My stomach is being eaten
    Away by acid
    No food, Just hunger
    For 72 hours
    My body is
    Shattered

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    this is gay

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    WAIT-armypunk-these are her thoughts and this her way of expressing them. You may think its gay but alot of people on here enjoy reading eachothers poetry...because alot of people feel it or have felt it some way or another...

    will you please have some consideration.
    everything happens for a reason...beginning to wonder why.

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    Naw. It's alright Squirrley, he can say whatever he wants about me. He thinks I'm an ignorant ****in' bitch anyway, so let him say whatever he want because I'm seriously am not bothered.

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    mmm i kinda agree with army on this one. it doesn't seem to make any sense wah so ever.its just words put together rly

    roses are red
    violates are blue
    this poems corny
    but u make me horney

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    Can't you see what it's about? It's about tiredness. I was well tired so I wrote a poem about it. It's about how my body can not be arsed to do anythin' but I made it sound better. Hahaha.

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