If only...

[oscar60981]

I wrote this poem one night after going out with my girlfriend. and I had realized that I really love her, but I wasn't sure how she felt about me. It's ok, but I was curious if girls really like poems from guys, or do girls think that the guy is too sensitive (in others words, too much like a girl)?

Love
The cool crisp of the wind
The Bright rays of the morning sun
The eternal thought that I have sinned
The one that I call my Hun

I Love the way she looks at me
With those Hazel eyes that sink into me
Her everlasting scent lingers with me
Could she possibly love me?

Love cannot even describe the way I feel for her
Lord, if this is love, never take it away
And if only I could tell her...
Tell her what I think of her

her face
her smile
her eyes
her laugh
her kindness
her lips
her love
If Only...

[Somone]

I like your poem very much

[blue]

i think that poetry is awsome it is agreat way to express yourself, and i wont think my guy is to musshy or a wuss if he writes poetry.
even illusional writes poetry, ne way of expresion is beutiful!
i like your poem by the way