Nice
Nice and beautiful poem.
You might reconsider some rhymes and words but is ok for beginning.
Try not to force the words, let them grow, take shape and life.
A good poem not always gets its rhyme from words and syllabus but from what feelings he succeeds to give birth.
One last little advice: it's very useful to read the poem loud in your mind to see how it sounds.
Keep up the good work.
You never know what is going to happen unless you try.
The one feared by many, many he has to fear from.
There is no good deed without her reward.
If someone knows more than you know about yourself than that person is truly superior to you.
Remember when you judge people because you will be also judged, only worse.