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  1. 09-05-05, 02:31 AM #1
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    Trusted You

    I wrote this poem a few days ago. tell me what you think of it.

    I trusted you with my heart
    You always have treated it well
    But now you take advantage of your power
    And you take my heart into your fists
    Gently squeezing
    Testing out how hard you can squeeze before it gives out
    Pushing the limits too frequently
    You took it too far this time
    Now you look at my lifeless heart lying in your hand
    You feel guilty because it was your fault
    But know that all it takes to bring it back
    Is to unclench your fist
    And let us continue on
    So unclench it
    And watch the blood rush throughout it
    Bringing it back to life
    Bringing me back to you
  2. 10-05-05, 06:58 PM #2
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    what?

    what kind of poem was that..? ehhh...kinda freaky...
  3. 10-05-05, 06:59 PM #3
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    Don't Let It Happen

    Ehhh....dude...don't Let Her Overpower You Or Take You For Granted...
    You're A Man....don't Go Back To Her..
  4. 11-05-05, 05:12 AM #4
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    Quote Originally Posted by ghenzmitz
    Ehhh....dude...don't Let Her Overpower You Or Take You For Granted...
    You're A Man....don't Go Back To Her..

    Uhh...excuse me? I'm NOT a dude! I'm a girl jeez! *sigh*
    But uhh...thx for the advice anyway? I guess.
  5. 14-05-05, 08:22 PM #5
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    I quite liked your poem.
  6. 16-05-05, 09:40 AM #6
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    Why thank you Pilot
  7. 16-05-05, 10:58 AM #7
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    I thought it was pretty bad.
  8. 17-05-05, 06:18 AM #8
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    Wow you have got issues.
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    I like it... reminds me of someone I know...
  10. 24-06-05, 02:15 AM #10
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    Quote Originally Posted by AmIASleaze
    I like it... reminds me of someone I know...

    Let me guess...another friend with benefits?
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