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    a good 1

    i didnt write this but i thought it was good

    For You Are The One

    For you I would climb
    The highest mountain peak
    Swim the deepest ocean
    Your love I do seek.

    For you I would cross
    The rivers most wide
    Walk the hottest desert sand
    To have you by my side.

    For you are the one
    Who makes me whole
    You've captured my heart
    And touched my soul.

    For you are the one
    That stepped out of my dreams
    Gave me new hope
    Showed me what love means.

    For you alone
    Are my reason to live
    For the compassion you show
    And the care that you give.

    You came into my life
    And made me complete
    Each time I see you
    My heart skips a beat.

    For you define beauty
    In both body and mind
    Your soft, gentle face
    More beauty I'll ne'er find.

    For you are the one
    God sent from above
    The angel I needed
    For whom I do love.

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    nice flow but lacks creativity...like most other poems.

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