Dr phil

[Sami09]

Does anyone watch that show. Yesterday it was about two twin that are heroin addicted. they have 3 episode about them and they for sure have gone a long way. They are both heading to different rehab centers. I really hope they stay clean. one of the girls is 6 months pregnant is it possible for that baby to survive i wonder she did heroin and did drink and does smoke while the baby in her stomach. Did anyone see these episode.

[Gigabitch]

Stories like this are why I am for sterilization of some people. Sew that girl shut, for God's sake.

[Sami09]

At least the girls at getting help. You didnt see the show but wow where they bad when they first began.

[Kiechi]

At least the girls at getting help. You didnt see the show but wow where they bad when they first began.

You watch alot of TV.

[Sami09]

Not really i watch a few shows. Not dr phil all the time just when it good. talk shows have good topic some days and really bad ones other days.

[King Zarathu]

Does anyone watch that show(1). Yesterday(2) it was about two twin(3) that are heroin (4)addicted. they have 3 episode(5) about them and they for sure have gone a long way. They are both heading to different rehab centers. I really hope they stay clean. (6)one of the girls is 6 months pregnant(7) is it possible for that baby to survive i(8) wonder she did heroin(9) and did (10)drink and does (11)smoke while the baby in her stomach. Did anyone see these episode(12).

(1) Incorrect punctuation.
(2) Lack of punctuation.
(3) *twins
(4) "Heroin addicted?" You must be a moron.
(5) *episodes
(6) Capitalize.
(7) Lack of punctuation.
(8) Capitalize.
(9) Lack of punctuation.
(10) In this context, "and did drink" is wrong.
(11) Run-on. Consider revising.
(12) *episodes; incorrect punctuation.

Not really(1) (2)i watch(3) a few shows. Not (4)dr (5)phil all the time just when it(6) good. (7)talk shows have good topic(8) some days and really bad ones other days(9).

(1) Lack of punctuation.
(2) Capitalize.
(3) *watched
(4) Capitalize.
(5) Capitalize.
(6) *it's
(7) Capitalize.
(8) *topics
(9) The way you worded it makes you sound ****ing stupid.

At least the girls at(1) getting help. You didn(2)t see the show but (3)wow where they bad when they first (4)began.

(1) *are
(2) *didn't
(3) Unnecessary and illegal.
(4) Replace with "started."

[Sami09]

Come on give me a break .

[Gigabitch]

Yeah, leave her alone, Zar. What's the matter with you? You need a footrub or something?

[King Zarathu]

Come on(1) give me a break (2).

(1) Lack of punctuation.
(2) Unnecessary space.

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No.

[Sami09]

zac is a ****in loser just leave it alone thats all i am asking.

[King Zarathu]

(1)zac is a ****in loser(2) just leave it alone(3) that(4)s all (5)i am asking.

(1) *Zach; we know.
(2) Lack of punctuation.
(3) Lack of punctuation.
(4) *that's
(5) Capitalize.

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No.

[anachronistic]

zarathu, don't you feel hopeless about sami and her grammar?

[King Zarathu]

Yes .

[anachronistic]

then why do you fight it?

[King Zarathu]

It's a long story.