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    GrkScorp ...

    How about you write up a new LoveForum.net poem? Since you write so friggin' well!
    no autographs, please!

    The more I see, the more I don't know for sure. - John Lennon

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    I concur.

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    Quote Originally Posted by tooxshort View Post
    How about you write up a new LoveForum.net poem? Since you write so friggin' well!
    Thank you.., and i'd love to write one or two..

    However.., my days of creative writing are a thing of the past..

    Plus.., I haven't the slightest clue as to what to write about..

    But i'm open to any kind of suggestion from you..

    Although I don't think poetry is something one could write fast..

    The form and style.., will take some thinking no doubt..

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    roses are red
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    gskorps posts are too long
    but just skip over them and you should be cool.
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    Scorp's advice is always too cool
    He is down with the old school
    While in his posts some will drown in tears
    Others will see wisdom beyond his years
    Don't cry, don't regret and don't blame
    Weak find the whip, willing find freedom
    Towards the sun, carry your name
    In warm hands you are given
    Ask the wind for the way
    Uncertainty's gone, your path will unravel
    Accept all as it is and do not blame
    God or the Devil
    ~Born to Live - Mavrik~

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mishanya View Post
    Scorp's advice is always too cool
    He is down with the old school
    While in his posts some will drown in tears
    Others will see wisdom beyond his years
    Bravo! (clap)

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    See ... Mish has the idea ...

    Well, 'Scorp ... you can use the other LF poem as a template almost. Not word for word, of course, but as a rough idea. Incorporate the regulars and people that stand out... and eloquently make the rhyme relevant to them.

    You can do it. If you can type up a 2 page reply, then a little poem couldn't hurt.
    no autographs, please!

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    Life is ... Too Short.

    "It seems we living the 'American Dream', but the people highest up got the lowest self-esteem. The prettiest people do the ugliest things ... for the road to riches and diamond rings."

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    Quote Originally Posted by tooxshort View Post
    You can do it. If you can type up a 2 page reply, then a little poem couldn't hurt.
    Expository vs. creative..

    Though.., i'll start.., by giving much credit to the poetic talent of this forum.., RSK..

    This one is called "Role Playing" (note: this is intended for the guys)

    This vixen of mine,
    is never the same,
    she has many roles,
    all part of her game,

    It starts with a fire,
    a blaze in her eyes,
    a warm inviting smile,
    all teasing and lies,

    And the burning desire,
    of mine is her toy,
    tonight the croquette,
    a prostitute that plays coy,

    And when lust turns to rage,
    promises that are fiction,
    tonight the seductress,
    a nurse of affliction,

    And a pain deep within,
    longing for but one joy,
    tonight the mistress,
    a teacher for this boy,

    But be it the temptress,
    the lady or the whore,
    perhaps her greatest role,
    is the woman I adore
    If you can't stop the Wind, then you can't stop the Storm.

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    I was thinking more along the lines of:

    [url]http://www.loveforum.net/love-poem/8581-new-improved-loveforum-poem.html[/url]
    no autographs, please!

    The more I see, the more I don't know for sure. - John Lennon

    Life is ... Too Short.

    "It seems we living the 'American Dream', but the people highest up got the lowest self-esteem. The prettiest people do the ugliest things ... for the road to riches and diamond rings."

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    Quote Originally Posted by tooxshort View Post
    I was thinking more along the lines of:

    [url]http://www.loveforum.net/love-poem/8581-new-improved-loveforum-poem.html[/url]
    I don't think I could get myself to write something like that..

    I don't like leaving people out.., and there are just so many people here on LF.., not fair to mention some over others.., everyone is deserving of their own poem..
    If you can't stop the Wind, then you can't stop the Storm.

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    How about we list everyone deserving to be included in the new LF poem and then others can help widen the list. Once we have a complete list of names we can start thinking about the poem around them.

    I'll start the list:

    Shorty
    Mish (Sorry, had to put myself at the top)
    SCorp
    Indi
    Giga
    Tone
    Bluesummer
    Miso
    Vash
    Gribble
    Pears
    Fras
    Raver (Illusional)
    Kiechi
    Lesa
    Charlie Boy
    DM
    Missleepy
    Lastwish
    Neo
    Mathias
    OV
    Lilwing
    Littlewing
    Chlorine
    Converse
    LV
    bohemiandonut
    1averagejoe
    Cam
    Foxylady
    Bloodtippedrose
    Rosebud

    I know I definetly missed someone, someone else can add.

    Who wants to be on the list verification comittee?
    Don't cry, don't regret and don't blame
    Weak find the whip, willing find freedom
    Towards the sun, carry your name
    In warm hands you are given
    Ask the wind for the way
    Uncertainty's gone, your path will unravel
    Accept all as it is and do not blame
    God or the Devil
    ~Born to Live - Mavrik~

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    is this a popularity contest?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Mishanya View Post
    I know I definetly missed someone, someone else can add.
    Ashliejae
    Asparagoose
    boobaa
    Cain
    DarkDwarf
    DoesntMatter
    enterprise
    jinx343
    Kromat
    lastwish
    lemonade69
    Lozenger
    Off2College
    okapa
    sine24
    squirrley
    Tiay

    ..., and many many more..
    If you can't stop the Wind, then you can't stop the Storm.

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    I say if you ever leave anyone out, you have to write a whole NEW poem dedicated to that person. Haha.
    no autographs, please!

    The more I see, the more I don't know for sure. - John Lennon

    Life is ... Too Short.

    "It seems we living the 'American Dream', but the people highest up got the lowest self-esteem. The prettiest people do the ugliest things ... for the road to riches and diamond rings."

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