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  1. #1
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    How

    AS I WAS IN THE MIDDLE OF THE BLUE LAKE.....I SAW THESE THINGS...AND I DESCRIBED THEM...THE MAN BEING DESCRIBED...REFERS TO MYSELF....

    How

    How beautiful the blue sky that covers the dark fog in the lake
    And see the essence of truth in loneliness that this man takes
    The truth that lies in his loneliness makes the blue loom shiver
    And fogs that cover his sadness form like threads of the water

    How amazing does the water in the lake express its existence
    And all the little dirty flowers present a holistic dance prominence
    The mud that sticks to the waters implies the uniqueness of every wonder
    And without mud in every pure liquid is a soul with empty future

    How studios this man’s eyes wants to see the blueness of the water
    The mirror image that appeared reflects how distinct he is
    Despair, loneliness and sadness compare less to happiness
    Because the color tells of how every thing wants to express

  2. #2
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    Wow, your a good poet dude, lol
    Boys dont cry...

  3. #3
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    i'm only 18

    i 'm not really a good poet....things really appeared on my mind during that time...i'm really very lonely right now....so i'm writing poems that i thought might really ease this pain....

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