random stuff

[Clifton]

i never knew it was the start of something dangerous
an empty pain is left in my chest off the strange lust
it seems she succeeded to refrain us
from a beautiful future, so love drained dust
leavin my ribcage hallow
truth is, i could barely even swallow
i was in shock for 3 weeks i dreamed for a tomarrow
when we could be together again- so i followed
your words like a guide, tried to see it through your eyes
but love blinded me from your layers, your disguise
now when i picture your face, its dripping wet with blood
not yours but mine, im still bleeding inside
its hard enough just to hide, cant you see...
you will always be a peice of me
my queen, i know it will never be
i still want to kiss you
but we tore apart like tissue
and i miss you
and i miss you

****it, dont come crying when the new one ****s you over
he cant love you like i did, and im not your ****ing shoulder
i cant take the pain you cause me
left my ****ing viens soggy
but im slowly drying, my scratches destroying your itch
im better than how you did me bitch
your ears are shut to my voice now
your headed down a dismal path
but i cant stop you from ruining yourself
see, thats the way of karma, wrath
i really dont wish you any wrong
but i hafto stand up for myself, and i cant keep calm
really no blame to place
but now i see she was only concerned with race
and you didnt wanto fight for me
thats ok, but no longer can i fight for you
and i dont need you to make it through the day
ill find someone who can appriciate me
and still give me that feeling
dark dusty doomed days shes dealing
see, that bitch just wants you to fail
but i wouldve made sure you didnt
i know you dont see that
but why should i care? when you do her bidding
its funny though
you walked on me
he will walk on you
i will find someone to walk with
and maybe one day you will too
i hope...

[squirrley]

theres a start!!!!!

[Breezy18]

Wow. Trying to work through something are we? Good job outlines.

Forgive me, but it kinda reminds me of that song Adam Sandler did in the Wedding Singer for his ex Linda. The one that he sings for Drew Barrymore, that starts off all sweet and everything and ends up nasty. lol Hilarious. Not that your poem was or anything outlines. Just reminded me of that song is all.

[Clifton]

haha actually i had wrote the first half before then i went to put it on here, and i just wrote the 2nd then hit enter