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    How would you feel if you received a poem like this from your ex...

    Hello Ladies, I need your eyes to read, and your good sense to help me...

    I wrote this e.mail to my ex whom I can't get out of my mind, I still love her but I sent her this poem 3 days ago and now I am just wondering how she could feel as I didd´nt get any answer from her. Do you think she'll be upset ?

    Here it is :

    I have had strange dreams recently that's why I was woundering how you were.
    I had this one especially, that kept dancing in my head and I wanted to share it with you, I called it "Mirror Dream".

    My eyes closed, I am dreaming
    In my arms, someone
    My arms are breaking under the weight of this unknown and heavy shape
    My eyes, open, hers as well, floating in the middle of a pale face
    I kiss her and feel her blue lips over mine
    Cold like marble: symbol of the tomb of our love
    I take distance: breathe, realize and suddenly remember, remember the shape of this cold and dry mouth, of these eyelids
    I stop to breathe, to feel but everything is clear now: they are mine; I am dead, holding my own body…
    I come back to the reality of my bedroom, the reality of my bed clothes
    I am breathing, feeling and hearing again, in full power of all my senses…
    It was as if a part of me was dead or sneaked away from my own self but smoothly and delicately…
    As this death, that had been oppressing my soul for months, had just broken free, a sensation of peace flew through my whole body and mind: I feel strong and free again...

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    What did you mean by the last 2 lines Nilis? I interpretted it as that you'd finally gotten over her and are ready to move on.

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    that would be very out of character for my ex, so except for thinking that he's gone nuts, I'd also know that he still thought about me and I had the power to contact him if and whenever I wanted to.

    Look, if she doesn't write back, then she's just not feelin' it. The ball is in her court, so just accept it and move on.

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    Writing a love poem to an ex is out of the ballpark. Massive failure rate.

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    No I still think of her...it was just a dream...

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