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    my song!!!!

    Hi,
    Just composed a song. Please read it and give me some feedbacks on how you feel about the song in terms of its meaning, emontion, lyric.
    Cheers,

    Violet flower on the ground
    Composed by NN
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    One day on my path appeared your foot steps
    The sun was so brightly shinning and on thistle tree many birds were singing
    And one day has passed…
    The path is still waiting without,without hearing your footsteps
    Long ago, you have been absent from this path
    The tree leaves are now falling in autumn wind
    And this wind still wants follow somebody’s food steps everyday, leaving the autumn going with the flying leaves
    Please don’t go, please don’t go
    Because somebody had not told somebody something
    Everyday, the sun set a kiss on the footsteps
    And the violet flower is still falling all over my ground
    The path has not forgotten the name of the feet
    The feet has already forgotten the small path
    Who was on a hurry to go leaving somebody standing alone there, looking for the feet of somebody in the sound of the falling leaves
    Life is strange, fantalizing unreal things
    Heart is strange, yearning for unrealizable dreams
    Then one day, one day fulled of missing feelings become emptiness
    Which pair of feet are violet flowers, letting the flower falling all over the ground

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    how about some chords or some idea into the melody please...

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    ...wow... simply...a...mazing...
    Live together. Die alone - [url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lvi_RCM3FAM[/url]

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