Shattered heart to pieces, broken scaborous wings
Suicide locks, a beautiful part and pretty slit scars
Blood soaked sins tightens around my scarified body
Wrapping me, squeezing me into tiny ugly segments
I dream I've dreamt, a thousand times before
Was the only thing I loved, a dream, a dream of pain
Immortality has taken over me, secrets unlocked
Leading life without a soul to live, my black hole
A dusty little puppet, too weak to fly
Forgotten on the floor, left to die
+ Follow This Topic
Results 1 to 11 of 11
Thread: Unlocked Seduction
-
12-01-05, 05:19 AM #1
Normal User
- Join Date
- Mar 2004
- Location
- South East London Borderline Kent
- Posts
- 4,388
Unlocked Seduction
-
12-01-05, 05:25 AM #2
Regular User
- Country:
- Join Date
- Jul 2003
- Location
- Wouldn't you like to know ;)
- Posts
- 3,538
Once again, I love this one babe. You have some good writing skills!
My New Car!! [URL=http://www.cardomain.com/ride/2058343]Cardomain![/URL]
"Be Mindful of The Future, But Not At The Expense of The Moment"
"Life is the art of drawing without an eraser"
-
12-01-05, 05:27 AM #3
Normal User
- Join Date
- Mar 2004
- Location
- South East London Borderline Kent
- Posts
- 4,388
Only SOME good writing skills...! Not as amazing as you though babe!
-
12-01-05, 05:30 AM #4
Regular User
- Country:
- Join Date
- Jul 2003
- Location
- Wouldn't you like to know ;)
- Posts
- 3,538
Why thank you, but in my opinion..this is better then quite a couple of mine!
My New Car!! [URL=http://www.cardomain.com/ride/2058343]Cardomain![/URL]
"Be Mindful of The Future, But Not At The Expense of The Moment"
"Life is the art of drawing without an eraser"
-
12-01-05, 05:34 AM #5
Normal User
- Join Date
- Mar 2004
- Location
- South East London Borderline Kent
- Posts
- 4,388
Pffft, whateeeever! Hehehe!
We're having exactly the same convo as we had before! Hehehe!
-
12-01-05, 06:11 AM #6
Regular User
- Country:
- Join Date
- Jul 2003
- Location
- Wouldn't you like to know ;)
- Posts
- 3,538
This is true rofl.
My New Car!! [URL=http://www.cardomain.com/ride/2058343]Cardomain![/URL]
"Be Mindful of The Future, But Not At The Expense of The Moment"
"Life is the art of drawing without an eraser"
-
13-01-05, 06:24 PM #7
different state of mind
- Country:
"Hot Love Pancake(s)"
- Join Date
- Sep 2001
- Gender
- Posts
- 16,389
well as everyone knows i never browse in the poetry section but the title did catch my eyes. unlocked seduction huh?? honestly it sounds like a piece where you got raped or something. dammit i knew you were into that bondage crap, lucky innova i guess. well here goes...
locked in chains, outside rain, dulls the sounds of screams, only in my dreams
could i ever pretend, pain as pleasure, not a means to an end
nor do you defend, against the whips and leather, brazilian feathers
are supposed to tickle, but your pickle, is locked in a vice, your life
flashes before your eyes in the candle light, the sight, of a room barely lit, SIT
as your master commands you, tells you to lick her shoe
this bondage has placed a spell, your soul you would sell
because you pleasure, different erotica you do measure
the hot wax sends endorphines, metamorphing
straight to the brain, unlocked by pain
a new seduction has been set free, your ejaction without any pussy
something off the top of my head. enjoy.
raverboy...this is just my perspective on the situation...
-
13-01-05, 11:57 PM #8
Normal User
- Country:
- Join Date
- Jul 2004
- Gender
- Location
- Florida
- Posts
- 2,232
u never cease to amaze !!!!!
It takes a minute to have a crush on someone, an hour to like someone, a day to love someone - but it takes a lifetime to forget someone"
People change and forget to tell each other.
-
14-01-05, 05:24 AM #9
-
- Country:
"Hot Love Pancake(s)"
- Join Date
- Dec 2004
- Gender
- Posts
- 14,687
Just kinda freaked me out. I was having a good day too...
-
18-01-05, 11:52 AM #10
atada a mis pies.
- Country:
- Join Date
- Nov 2004
- Posts
- 15,440
the title got me too. i was like "ooooh there's naught stuff goin' on up in here."
that was nice. totally depressing, but nice.
-
31-01-05, 04:09 PM #11
Normal User
- Join Date
- Mar 2004
- Location
- South East London Borderline Kent
- Posts
- 4,388
Ahh well, I always put random titles for my poem which has nothing to do with the poem. Like most people with their songs. Hehehe!
Similar Threads
-
Seduction...
By The SpaceCowboy in forum Ask a Female ForumReplies: 3Last Post: 26-09-09, 08:51 PM -
Seduction....well sorta
By leight69 in forum Love Advice forumReplies: 5Last Post: 05-11-03, 12:29 PM
