Hi,
Just composed a song. Please read it and give me some feedbacks on how you feel about the song in terms of its meaning, emontion, lyric.
Cheers,
Violet flower on the ground
Composed by NN
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One day on my path appeared your foot steps
The sun was so brightly shinning and on thistle tree many birds were singing
And one day has passed…
The path is still waiting without,without hearing your footsteps
Long ago, you have been absent from this path
The tree leaves are now falling in autumn wind
And this wind still wants follow somebody’s food steps everyday, leaving the autumn going with the flying leaves
Please don’t go, please don’t go
Because somebody had not told somebody something
Everyday, the sun set a kiss on the footsteps
And the violet flower is still falling all over my ground
The path has not forgotten the name of the feet
The feet has already forgotten the small path
Who was on a hurry to go leaving somebody standing alone there, looking for the feet of somebody in the sound of the falling leaves
Life is strange, fantalizing unreal things
Heart is strange, yearning for unrealizable dreams
Then one day, one day fulled of missing feelings become emptiness
Which pair of feet are violet flowers, letting the flower falling all over the ground