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    Giving In

    The beautiful me
    so obscene
    shes left a impression
    borderline to obsession
    If given
    she'll knock you off
    I tried to pull back
    falling forward
    stabbed in the back

    For so long I thought forever
    memories cloud
    you ask whenever?
    hearts collide
    falling behind
    no more love inside
    getting over you
    my emotional landslide

    I'll give in and die
    take me over
    sweep my mind
    I confided
    to your lies
    stolen pride
    Feeling red lines intertwine
    with no compassion
    I'm my hearts assassin
    breathless
    in suicidal fashion

    In your eyes
    fading elegance
    hiding lies
    not quite clear
    when I'm the one who's blind
    how I should go from here
    you were the one
    we said love was everlasting
    my hearts breakin I fear
    its not lasting

    I'll give in and die
    take me over
    sweep my mind
    I confided
    to your lies
    stolen pride
    Feeling red lines intertwine
    with no compassion
    I'm my hearts assassin
    breathless
    in suicidal fashion


    The games just fade in my head
    reveled excuses to play it again
    Looking for the end
    Behind the scenes
    asking when?
    there's more than you can see
    you were just a dream
    Why cant it be
    you were head over me
    Why couldn't you get over me
    not over you

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    Nice Poem. I really love reading poems. Thanks for sharing.

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