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  1. #1
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    Aug 2004
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    Angel

    I wrote this poem for and about my girlfriend, Angel.

    Angel

    The greenest forest
    The bluest water
    The clearest day
    The brightest star
    None of which compares to the essence
    The glow, the shroud of beauty
    Bestowed upon me this day

    Her eyes, you could gaze into forever
    Her lips, soft as the shrouding clouds
    Her smile, more beautiful than beauty itself
    Her touch, to die for.

    Blessed to me
    I convey to her my love
    My trust, my loyalty
    My heart.

    From the skies above
    She soars with wings of light
    Her body glistening in the everlasting sun

    To stop time so that I could be with her forever
    For our love to last til' the end of time
    That would make me eternally greatful

    From holding her in my arms
    To that oh so sweet kiss
    These things I will cherish forever
    And never forget.

    What do you think?

  2. #2
    Join Date
    Jun 2004
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    thats awesome. great job! lots of feeling and emotion to it!

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