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  1. #1
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    I Couldn't Live

    Haven't written much poetry before, but I was just laying in my bed writing in my journal one day, and this just kinda popped in my head...


    I couldn't live without your voice
    To calm and soothe my fear
    A voice so gentle just like an angel's
    Assures me that you're near

    I couldn't live without your eyes
    To look into every time and see
    Your magical world where our dreams come true
    I could gaze for eternity.

    I couldn't live without your touch
    Your arms around me in warm embrace
    Gentle caresses of little sweet kisses
    So soft like delicate lace.

    I couldn't live without your love,
    Your smile, your care, your kiss
    You're all I need to just go on
    Without you, I’d be lifeless
    "The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return"
    -Moulin Rouge

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    Wow thats really good. I like that alot.
    Life is too short so love the one ya got, 'cause you might get run over or you might get shot...
    -Sublime (Thanks jslaughter )

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    Wow, thats pretty good, nice!


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    Hey, I really like that. I would like it even more had my girl of 4 years not just left me, but yeah. I really really like it, call me up some time, and sing it to me, i'll play the guitar.
    The voices in my head tell me I'm not crazy.
    "Take off your cool, I wanna see you." Andre 3000

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    i really like it. if you dont mind i am going to send it to my guy! that is exactly how i feel as well! dont worry i will give you credit for writing it!

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