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[MCLEMORE4569]

My Sunshine

Before we met
My path was distance
Meeting lots of girls
But all with resistance
Newly divorce
With no remorse
I gave it my all
My only recourse
My goals are now clear
No dating this year
Financially sound
Gets rid of my frown.
My path now is dark
Uncertain for sure
Until one night
I met this girl
My face hurt so deep
This smile I keep
The feeling inside
So natural so true
Not wanting no other
Just being with you
My path has shown light
On the gloomy dark street
Her face and her height
And even her feet
As time moves slow,
As we get to know
The pleasures so deep
My sunshine I’ll keep.

[RSK]

Wow, I Liked It, But Maybe That's Because I Was Listening To Andy Williams' Speak Softly Love