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    Old Poem

    So this is a poem I wrote back in 2000' about my girlfriend at the time. She found it the otherday in the abis of the Internet and emailed me to see if I had in fact wrote it as well as 3 others she came across. Anyway, I thought I'd post this one. I don't know what I was thinking back then; she was so wrong for me. Anyway, enjoy.

    Perfect Love

    What I've found with her
    Is unlike all that has come before
    And with it comes a new definition of love
    More sincere than I've ever known

    There have been times past
    Leading me to believe I knew love
    Yet they never touched my soul quite the same
    Never inspired such deep emotion

    With her in my loving arms
    I'm taken away to a special place
    Where the world is right and I'm complete
    From all of life's troubles, I can hide

    Through good times and bad
    Our love withstands life's obstacles
    Working together, our love grows stronger
    For we were meant to be one, forever

    Never again will I wake alone
    Wondering what I'm waking for
    Because by my side, the answer, it's there
    For I live each day for her
    "Oh Lord it's hard to be humble, when you're perfect in every way. I can't wait to look in the mirror, cause I get better loking each day. To know me is to love me, I must be a hell of a man. Oh Lord it's hard to be humble, but I'm doing the best that I can." Mac Davis

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    I think that is quite nice, TAVS. I bet she really loved that you wrote it for her.

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    Boy were you off when you wrote that!
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