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Thread: A Lost Mind

  1. #1
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    A Lost Mind

    A Lost Mind

    Silent streets empty lanes buffed cars
    Chilling air sticky dew sharp winds
    Wet eyes pale cheeks clammy skin
    Deafening yells evil whisper one word
    Wide stare focused pupil stinging look
    Small light far away slowly fades
    Stomach cramp finger jam spine shiver
    Journey ahead blocks now deadly past
    Trust one leave all break away
    Hurting you killing me confusing them
    Warm tears burning lashes trembling arm
    Fierce confidence Shaking pedestal harsh reality
    Empty heart trust issues growing pain
    Airy conversations artificial smile candied lie
    Entire vision infinite options blinded forever

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    Can't find the right words, but it is really Good, Lovely, "Going Through Heart" !
    I especially loved last three lines.

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