Love Gone Awry

[RedAngl19]

OK, so that's not the tile of this poem, but I didn't know hat else to put. I don't name my poems, I suck at it. But, needless to say, I was very unhappy when I wrote this. Oh, and I'm open to suggestions on a title.


Cries of anger and fits of rage
Here you are again on the same old page

Now burn in hell as well you should
Could of left it alone but you just never would

Voices in repetition, annoyance at its best
What I wouldn't give to tear your heart from your chest

To feel the beating of life slowly come to a stop
To watch the pain in your eyes as my hand lets it drop

To cause you the pain that you brought upon me
So you may never again love, without a heart you'll forever be




I've been told I'm an angry person. Nah!

[blue]

i like it !!

[RedAngl19]

i like it !!

Thanks!

I tried to only say what I said above, but it won't let me. Says it's too short. Strange.

[King Zarathu]

This would have brought tears to my eyes, except for the fact that I'm an insensitive and sarcastic asshole.


Nice.

P.S. Also, it check to see if the message is under 10 characters. It takes out all spaces, new lines, and anything in [quote].

[RedAngl19]

Yeah, I figured that much out. Hard to believe, I know.

And thanks.

[Roosterfosho]

lool that ones nicee

[yosef]

don't be sad

sometime we feel that the life became without taste . without colors . and when we find the true love we feel happy .

[dreamer101]

nice poem, very brutal and graphic, but an accurate depiction. +rep

[RedAngl19]

Thanks guys! As you can tell, I was pretty po'd that day. All is better though.