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    Someone Special

    Staring out the ocean
    Thinking of you sweetly
    As tears roll down my cheeks
    I remember that in the still of the night
    We kissed for the very first time
    The beginning of our love bloomed
    And the taste of love painted across my lips

    I was dissolved into the fragrant breath of yours
    Our passion was lost in the moonlight
    Then you held me tight and
    We walked silently through the night

    Wrapped in each other we were
    You were like a drug I had to take to keep me alive
    Bcause I was drunk, yearning for you
    You are that someone special
    Who has stolen away my soul

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    aw sweet.. and kinda sad.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Tiay View Post
    aw sweet.. and kinda sad.
    thank you Tiay

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    nice and so sweet poem

    thanx a lot
    Last edited by yosef; 01-11-06 at 03:04 AM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by yosef View Post
    nice and so sweet poem

    thanx a lot
    i agree n sad
    //stop ads//

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    i like everything except the end. its like this beautiful different love poem, but then when you get to the third paragraph its like what the ****? change the ending so it goes with the rest of the poem.

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