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Thread: Don't ask why I wrote it... Its was for Valentines day

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    Don't ask why I wrote it... Its was for Valentines day

    On this special occasion of Valentine’s Day,
    There is only one thing stuck on my mind to say,
    That there hasn’t been one particular day,
    When I didn’t think about you in any particular way.

    There was a time when I did love you,
    There was a time when I hoped you would love me too.
    After everything that both of us has been through,
    I am saddened at how it passed us both so soon.

    But we are friends now, and I know it’s for the best,
    There is nothing really more I have to confess.
    This is probably what I wanted all along, I guess
    I’m glad it turned out this way, nothing more nothing less.

    It was good I ended my obsession, enough is enough,
    I guess what I gave to you just wasn’t the right stuff.
    Today I hope you are blessed by your one true love,
    The person that was destined for you from heaven above.

    So after all this, I just want to say,
    Please have a very happy Valentine’s Day.

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    I liked it all, except for the last two cheesy lines;

    So after all this, I just want to say,
    Please have a very happy Valentine’s Day.


    You can end it perfectly with the last stanza.

    Thankyou.

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