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    Untitled

    When an opportunity comes your way... TAKE IT!



    The Atlantic stood before those Men
    Never ending Monstrous Ocean
    Far enough to reach the Land
    Of Mythical fables and Sorcerers’ potion

    On the pebble beach they glared
    With shivering spines
    And silenced commotion

    Fear of Man
    Displayed and despaired
    Nature of Goliath
    David impaired

    Of the hundred and fifty Men
    All but one
    Were buried in Den

    Out from the crowd
    Came this figure
    Heart filled with courage
    And eyes starved of hunger

    He swam across the breadth of tides
    From Boston rain to Lisbon brook
    He looked behind for a glare
    Chances men who never took

    He thought about them day and night
    Never will they risk the fall
    The safe way means to loose it all

    All their reason washed away
    Masked in their makeshift sign
    The Atlantic Ocean they once saw
    Washed against the tide of time

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    Bravo, bravo!

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    thx lilwing!

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    that is interesting.. good job

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