Dreams of places far away..
Thoughts come back from that day.
Stars shine ever so bright..
Why did I leave that cold night?
I remember you sitting,
asking me please.
Stopped in time,
Like somone said, "freeze!".
You shared your thoughts, hopes, and fears,
and I drove away in tears.
Your eyes full of sorrow,
with no thoughts of tomorrow.
All I wanted,
was your strength to borrow.
I have many thoughts and questions of that night,
I often wish,
You just might.
We shared a love,
that was strong.
Even if it wasn't,
all that long.
Days go by,
and I try to let go.
Everytime I think of you,
the tears just flow.
I know one day,
you will forgive and forget.
But right now,
I am full of regret.
As time goes by,
I feel like a dunce.
All I know,
is that I loved you once.
Written by.. yours truly.. Jane
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01-03-04, 08:45 AM #1
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I Loved You Once
"Remember always, that you not only have the right to be an individual, you have an obligation to be one."
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" It's not who we are that holds us back, it's who we think we're not."
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"...to love and lose, is better than not to love at all..." .... Lord, whats his name....
" The world is big... I want to see all of it before it gets dark." -- John Muir
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01-03-04, 07:10 PM #2
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that was beautiful, Jane!
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Thank you
"Remember always, that you not only have the right to be an individual, you have an obligation to be one."
- - Eleanor Roosevelt
" It's not who we are that holds us back, it's who we think we're not."
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"...to love and lose, is better than not to love at all..." .... Lord, whats his name....
" The world is big... I want to see all of it before it gets dark." -- John Muir
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01-03-04, 11:36 PM #4
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Wow, that was awesome...good job
I'm due for another poem, but all my dreams have been dark as of late, I need a little light in my life.
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thank ya again.. not as good as yours but Im no writer.
"Remember always, that you not only have the right to be an individual, you have an obligation to be one."
- - Eleanor Roosevelt
" It's not who we are that holds us back, it's who we think we're not."
- - Michael Nolan
"...to love and lose, is better than not to love at all..." .... Lord, whats his name....
" The world is big... I want to see all of it before it gets dark." -- John Muir
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02-03-04, 01:05 AM #6
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Remember sweetheart...poetry is not a comparision, its an expression
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"Remember always, that you not only have the right to be an individual, you have an obligation to be one."
- - Eleanor Roosevelt
" It's not who we are that holds us back, it's who we think we're not."
- - Michael Nolan
"...to love and lose, is better than not to love at all..." .... Lord, whats his name....
" The world is big... I want to see all of it before it gets dark." -- John Muir
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hey that sounds like i feel right now...are you reading my mind girl? whew, that was awesome... can I borrow that one?
Innova? sweetie? how can Jane and I get you out of this?
Youve got such a great personality...what's going on?
Ya know one day things will happen right? When youre ready or when youre least expecting it?everything happens for a reason...beginning to wonder why.
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You two being there for me is enough, been so great to be able to talk to people like yourselves.
I know one day, something good will happen, I'm long overdue lol...
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